Thursday, November 7, 2013
shapter 9-10
Petra is suspected of having telepathy when they hear her crys when she is in the river and David and Rosalind heard her because of their ability. Ann a member of the telepahic group marrys allan. Allan is not trust worthy and the group is very uneasy about this 6 months after they get married allan is found dead and ann had hung herself. Ann wrote a note to the inspector about all of the telepaths but the guy that found the not couln't read o he gave it to anns sister. Davis and rosalind fall in love but keep it quite beause their fathers are enemies. If petra somehow does figure out her ability premturely and desides that she wants to tell people she could be in alot of trouble. David and rosalind should keep their love secret if they tell their fathers wont allow either one of them to see eachother ever again. Why would and give away the names of the goup member if they were her friend maybe allan beat her and forced her to give them up she killed allan forgot about the note and killed herself.
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Good job on the summary part of it, nice and simple.
ReplyDeleteBut perhaps work on the Grammer
You can keep your hat this time.
I would imagine it would be hard to keep a secret like that from your significant other. Maybe she confessed, maybe Allan suspected something - I suppose the how and why doesn't matter much now that they are both dead! Can you think of other characters that have found themselves in predicaments like this?
ReplyDeleteYour crime solving skills are unmatched. I would suggest some outside relations or try to make a long or short term prediction.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on your grammar a little, but other than that your crime solving skills are exceptional, i think it would be a good idea for you to do some predictions.
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